This starts really well and the content that you have throughout is comprehensive (and correct) but you have way too much text on most of the slides; remember this is supposed to appeal to young people - how much do they like reading.
You have more than enough info so please condense it to include the most important information. You also need to proof read as there are quite a few spelling errors.
Try to maintain the same spacing and layout throughout too as it makes it look professional and smart.
Adam,
ReplyDeleteThis starts really well and the content that you have throughout is comprehensive (and correct) but you have way too much text on most of the slides; remember this is supposed to appeal to young people - how much do they like reading.
You have more than enough info so please condense it to include the most important information. You also need to proof read as there are quite a few spelling errors.
Try to maintain the same spacing and layout throughout too as it makes it look professional and smart.
Ellie