You have made a good start here and have managed to define most of the techniques whilst also linking them to examples.
To improve; - more detail is needed on the why - anti-realists narratives on the first slide is a good example of where you could have elaborated in far more detail - more needed on sex appeal slide at end - reference list needed - mention colour scheme (and link to bikinis) - link to other adverts more if you feel you can compare them to make more solid points (e.g., stand alone vs series).
Adam,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a good start here and have managed to define most of the techniques whilst also linking them to examples.
To improve;
- more detail is needed on the why - anti-realists narratives on the first slide is a good example of where you could have elaborated in far more detail
- more needed on sex appeal slide at end
- reference list needed
- mention colour scheme (and link to bikinis)
- link to other adverts more if you feel you can compare them to make more solid points (e.g., stand alone vs series).
EllieB